jbarhak wrote:
Slide 7: Need, under Clinical Urgency:
- Change the first bullet
From:
* There is a pressing need to utilize computational modeling & simulation to support clinical research and decision making in healthcare.
To :
* Modeling and simulation offers the capabilities to potentially expedite and increase the efficiency of healthcare delivery by supporting clinical research and decision making
I agree with this change in conjunction with the augmentation the Martin suggested as indicated in my previous response.
jbarhak wrote:
From:
* There is a gap in mechanisms or processes for translating computational models to the clinical practice.
To:
* There is a gap in mechanisms or processes for translating computational research models to the clinical practice.
I agree.
jbarhak wrote:
- Add a new third bullet:
* Current computing technology can now replace many human tasks and decisions. It is important that the ability of computers is neither exaggerated nor diminished. It is important to gage this transition of tasks from human to machine in a manner that will be most efficient while diminishing negative phenomena. Establishing the credibility level of models will help smooth this transition.
This is very lengthy. It needs to be truncated to something more concise so that we stay consistent with the rest of the presentation format... I don't have an immediate suggestion on how we may reduce it, but it needs to be condensed so that it is consistent with the presentation and gets the point across quickly.
jbarhak wrote:
Slide 8: Need, Under the long list of Scattered activities:
Add the following bullet at the end of the slide:
* Sensitivity Analysis / Results Robustness
These are important, but we have run out of room to add anymore items. As I indicated in a previous response, the list is not intended to be complete. I have no issues with adding it, but we may need to drop something else. But my suggestion would be to take all of the items that have been suggested, and add them to the glossary of terms/phrases so that they are not lost.
jbarhak wrote:
Slide 10: Charge
Add a new bullet:
* Identify and promote innovative game changing technologies establishing model credibility
I think this is an integral part of the second charge, "Propose guidelines and procedures for
credible practice". As part of this second charge we are gong to be reviewing the various methods currently available, new and out of the box methods, as well as those we as a committee we are going to recommend as a unique contribution to the field. So I don't see the need to add this bullet.
jbarhak wrote:
Slide 11 Charge - Adopt a consistent terminology:
Add 4 bullets to the long list of vocabulary:
* Abstraction
* Assumption
* Intended Use
* Referent
Once again, the list is not intended to be complete. So I recommend adding these terms to the glossary so that they are captured in our end product. If there are strong feelings about including them, I am fine with adding them as long as they fit and the presentation does not get too busy. The intention of this presentation is to communicate our mission in a concise fashion, and I am concerned that adding to these lists that are intended to be examples may make the slides too busy to take away from the main message. But if you can creatively add them so that things look clean, I am fine with it.
jbarhak wrote:
Slide 12: Charge - Propose guidelines and procedures for credible practice:
Add the bullet
* Move towards models that directly tie claims to results
The consensus with Ahmet was: Proposing guidelines and procedures for credible practice is a step towards endorsing models that directly tie claims to results – please feel free to rephrase/omit
Agreed
jbarhak wrote:
Slide 14: Charge - promote good practice:
Add a new bullet:
* Reward Self Criticism: Suggest methods and promote cultures and environments that allow admitting failure to speed up the development cycle
by the statement, "admitting failure", is this getting at making clear statements of a model's limitations and not exaggerating the capabilities of the model? Perhaps an example will help me understand what is meant by this statement because right now I am not sure what it means exactly. I can interpret it in different ways.
jbarhak wrote:
Add a new Slide after Slide 14 with the Title Charge:
Sub title in bold is:
Identify and promote innovative game changing technologies establishing model credibility
Under this title add the following bullets:
* Engage with modelers and accumulate technologies in a list
* Identify technologies that are successful in one modeling field and check if those are applicable in other modeling fields.
* Assess possible benefits of each technology from certain to highly speculative.
* Disseminate the list of technologies and findings with the modelers and modeling community.
*** Please feel free to modify these since these points have not been reviewed by others and if you feel it is too cumbersome, you can omit and simplify.
Once again, this read very much like what the second charge is intended for. If you read the last bullet on the slide that covers the second charge, it reads as follows:
"Define novel translational workflows to enhance credibility of models and simulation processes"
Perhaps the best compromise is to take some of the above suggested content and augment the "Propose guidelines and procedures for credible practice" slide.
jbarhak wrote:
Slide 21: Participation:
Please add the following bullets to the multidisciplinary background list at the end of the slide:
* Scientists
* Physicists
* Physicians
* Pharmacists
I am good with this change, but I would drop "Scientists" since no one is a general scientist. A scientist will fall under some category, such as Physicists, Biologists, Mathematicians, Chemists, etc.
Also this list is not intended to be comprehensive, so I would edit the major bullet above the list to,
"Multidisciplinary background, including but not limited to:"
Hope that is all helpful. Thanks for all the work you and Jerry did on this, Jacob!
Lealem